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Finally got this done.
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*Tadpole7 Apr 16, 2013
Nice style.
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~olly-lofi Apr 20, 2013  Professional Artist
THANKS!!!
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~trivialtales Mar 6, 2013
A few problems with the speech on the last panel:

B.S. should be in past tense, "of" should be "have". You should say "worry about" instead of just worry, and "runned" should be "run". Also, the girls hand on panel 3 looks a little small to me.

Aside from that, I like your style a lot. You have a really good sense of color and line weight.
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~olly-lofi Mar 8, 2013  Professional Artist
Thanks for the feedback. I was thinking the same thing in panel three as I was coloring it.
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